雅思写作外教范文#53：发展中国家开发旅游业（含音轨）

s financial situation should take precedence over all else. The recent health scare, for example, lays testament to the life-giving power of economic activity, where many poor people in developing countries who depended on tourism for their livelihood, have now been forced to cease any type of business connected to the tourism industry, and as such, have slipped further into abject poverty.

In conclusion, it is without doubt that the central reason for developing countries to expand their tourism industry is because of the need to increase economic activity. It is clear, in my opinion, that this absolutely constitutes as being fundamentally positive, even though the environment may be negatively impacted.

- Essay Analysis 正因如此解析 -

- (1) Introduction

Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question 出题改述:

An increasing number of = A growing number ofdeveloping countries = under-developed nationsare expanding = are enlargingtourist industries = their tourist industries

Standard Phrase for the “Reason + Opinion” type essay 可能+观念类大考卷最高分字词：

This essay shall explore the reason for this phenomenon, along with explaining why I believe this to be an advantageous trend.

Words showing Cohesion (CCoC) 示范“整段与互通”的用法和词语语:

theirThis, along with

Vocabulary 最高分捷径用法和词语语：

advantageous trend (positive development) 不遗余力的趋势；有利的趋势

- (2) Body 1 -

Aspects that must be referred to 这段需要所述：

Why is this the case?

Standard IELTS essay phrase 报读高频字词：

The fundamental reason for why…is to

Vocabulary and Collocations 最高分捷径用法和词语语：

pursue 追求an enlargement 放大economic activity 在经济上活动domestic 国内的to spur 刺激；增进the creation of 塑造local inhabitants 当地区内impaired 受损的；处于劣势的GDP (gross national product)Historical 在历史上的Topographical 地形的；地形上的may be of interest to 确实感兴趣the knock-on effect 速食震荡immensely (beneficial/popular) 极大地

Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (CCoC) 示范“整段与互通”的用法和词语语：

, without doubt, (signposting 所在位置词语)to (purpose 注记目的)by both (signposting 所在位置词语), many of whom (relative pronoun 间的关系主语), and as a consequence, (cause and effect 本质)This (is especially important for) (relative pronoun + signposting 间的关系主语+所在位置词语), and yet (contrast 注记对比)That (relative pronoun 间的关系主语)can thus be (cause and effect 本质)

- (3) Body 2 -

Aspects that must be referred to 这段需要所述：

Is it a positive development?

Vocabulary and Collocations 最高分捷径用法和词语语：

a powerful and positive impact 弱小而不遗余力的影响can only be thought of as (being) 只会被忽视overwhelmingly 压倒性的the most notable 最明显的environmental degradation 周围环境衰弱it stands to reason that 理所当然；合情合理take precedence over all else 高于一切lays testament to 说明了the life-giving power of (also phrase of “life-giving qualities of” sth.) 视作灵魂的意志力livelihood 生计have now been forced to 早就被迫cease 停止have slipped further into 进一步滑向abject poverty 赤贫

Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (CCoC) 示范“整段与互通”的用法和词语语：

These (benefits) (relative pronoun 间的关系主语)that this (relative pronoun 间的关系主语)can only be thought of as (being) (signposting 所在位置词语)Despite (contrast 注记对比), that of (relative pronoun + of + identifies subject), it stands to reason that (signposting 所在位置词语)The recent (‘the’ indicates the reader knows what is ‘recent’ 引出阅读并不知道的最近的事件), for example, (showing example 举例), where (relative pronoun 间的关系主语)Who (relative pronoun 间的关系主语), and as such, (connects—cause and effect 连接可能和结果)

- (4) Conclusion -

Standard IELTS essay phrase 报读高频字词：

In conclusion,it is without doubtthat the central reason for

Vocabulary and Collocations 最高分捷径用法和词语语：

constitutes as 构成negatively impacted 负面影响

Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (CCoC) 示范“整段与互通”的用法和词语语：

is because of (result and reason 结果和可能)this (relative pronoun 间的关系主语), even though (contrast showing exception 对比，示范例外)

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